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Writ 121 Online Activities/Writing Exercises for Week 9

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As your Syllabus states, ten percent of your grade is based on the online activities and practice writing that we'll call Online Activities/Writing Exercises.

For week 9, we're going to include

    Blackboard Discussion Board online conversation (two initial postings)

    a chat session, and

    an Online Activity letter

Do note that the order I present these may vary from week to week, depending on what we're doing.

Attendance requirements

As I mention in the attendance requirements for our class, you must participate in online activities each week no later than the midnight deadline; otherwise I'll consider you absent.

Also, I will respond to and give credit to your letter/writing exercises only after I see evidence that you have fully participated in online activities--including chat when assigned--as required for the week.

Grading letters/exercises

Again, as your syllabus states,

  • Each letter and exercise is worth up to 10 points.
    • A hundred words expressing your thoughts about your writing or reading for this class will earn you 7 points.
    • You'll need to write two-hundred words or more with insight and thoughtfulness and you will need to participate beyond the minimum requirements in the online activities to earn the 10.

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Step 1: Post a response to the Blackboard Discussion Board.

Use the week 9 online conversation forum.

  • Share a TV or movie story.
  • In other words, tell us about a time when something involving TV or movies was particularly significant, odd, compelling, bizarre, monumental or such in your life.
  • The story can be from your childhood or from last night.  But it should be very narrow, and should potentially interest others.
  • Here's an example:
When I was four years old, one summer day I stood in my friend's garage, alone, watching the wringer washer machine* clean a load of clothes.

I had seen a Casper, the Friendly Ghost episode, in which our hero squeezed through the ringers of such a contraption. I glanced at my left hand and thought, why not?

Well, I found out why not. 

I stuck my fingers in, and realized that didn't feel good, so I tried to pull them out.

But I couldn't.

Instead the rollers slowly swallowed my fingers, then my palm, then slurped down my forearm.

I began to wail, continuing to pull as hard as I could, while the machine growled and shook.

Just as my elbow was being sucked in, my friend's father flew out of the house, hit a lever and popped up the top ringer. He then scooped me up and ran me home.

My mom  rushed me to emergency. No bones were broken.  However, much of the skin from my arm had been ripped off so that it looked like raw hamburger.  And it had to be slowly bathed in a brown antiseptic that burned horribly.

That was the day I found out I wasn't a ghost!


*For those who have little experience with these, wringer washers don't have a spin cycle to take out the excess water from the clothes.  Instead they have two rollers, kind of like rolling pins, one on top of the other, that spin slowly.  You stick the soggy clothes into the rollers, which squeeze the water out. Click here, if you would like to see a picture of one.


Step 2: Post another response to Blackboard Discussion Board.

Choose a passage from Ehrenreich, Kubey and Csikszentmihalyi, or Pollack and explain what is significant, interesting or curious about it. (The catch? You cannot choose a passage that has already been chosen by another class member.)

Follow closely the following steps: this is practice for using sources in your essay following MLA style.

Done___

 

  • First: Present the quotation, using MLA parenthetic citation (see WW 431-34). Here's an example from WW, "Strategies for Revision":
Toby Fulwiler says, "Revising is reseeing, rereading, rethinking, and reconstructing your thoughts on paper until they match those in your mind. It's conceptual work, generally taking place beyond the sentence, at the level of the paragraph and higher" (113).
Done___

 

  • Second: Explain how the writer uses the passage you choose. Is this the main point of the article? Is this a statement to show why those who disagree with the author are wrong? Is this part of the introduction or body of the discussion? In other words, show us the context of the passage--the part this quotation plays--so that we can see how it fits within the overall point of the reading.
With our example quotation, we could say that Fulwiler is defining the term revision, to show us how it is different from editing and proofreading. This quotation we find in his overview of revision--in subsequent chapters, he explains several techniques that we can use to "resee" our writing, by limiting our focus, adding support, switching our point of view and such.
Done___

 

  • Third: Explain how you might use this passage in your paper.
  • Is this an example of a position that supports what you want to give us insight about, or
    • is it an example of a different viewpoint than yours that you want to show is too narrow, ignoring your experience?
  • Does the quotation present effective evidence to support the point it's making?

In other words, show us why you find this quotation significant.


Done___

 

Step 3: Read and reply to other class members' Blackboard postings.

  • You can agree, disagree, question, qualify what your fellow class member says.
  • You also need to explain why you think so, again with support from your own experiences and observations, or from another article or web page.

You will need to respond at least twice to fulfill attendance requirements. However, you may enjoy responding to more.

  • And you likely will find yourself writing a stronger letter with fuller participation.

Step 4: Attend a scheduled chat session (a schedule is available under chat in the table of contents above):

Use the Blackboard Chat.

However, I suggest for a back up that you all have at your disposal AOL Instant Messenger. If you don't already have it, you can download it at http://www.aim.com . (And if for some reason you cannot use either Instant Messenger or the Blackboard Chat on your home computer? I suggest you go to the LCC computer lab.)

You do not need to be a member of AOL to use Instant Messenger and it's free.

  • Email me your user name, and I'll add it to the Scheduled Chat Times page, if you haven't done so already.

Again, your chat will be moderated by a class member rather than by me. See the scheduled chat session page link at the top of this page.

  • If your moderator doesn't show up on time, decide among yourselves who will moderate; whoever does will earn extra points on his or her  activity letter, as long as it is mentioned.
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  1. Share one of the articles that I assigned for your Essay 4 prewriting annotated bibliography.
  • You can show each other web pages in the group browser. Just type the URL in "Enter Address" box.
  • Explain briefly what the article is about, and what you think about it.
Done___

 

  1. Share your response to the video we watched, Does TV Kill?
  • What surprised you?
  • What looked very familiar to you?
  • Which issues brought up in the video would you like to find more research on?
Done___

 

  1. Share ideas you're considering for essay four--
  • try to brainstorm together as many possible insightful positions you can think of about TV and movies.
  • And after brainstorming possible topic positions, as a group decide on three to share with the rest of us on the Blackboard Discussion board, our week 9 online conversation forum.
  • Here's the catch, though. If another group has already posted, you can't repeat any of their topic positions.

And moderator, please post your group's three topic positions as soon after the chat as possible.

Blackboard Chat will make a transcript of your conversation, which you will be able to access after everyone in the chat room leaves. It's found in the Archives.

If you move to AIM, moderator, please save the chat and email me a transcript.

Done___

 

Step 5: Write Online Activity letter.

Tell me about your experience on the Blackboard discussion board and in chat discussing the assigned articles and ideas for essay four.

And choose one response on the discussion board from another class member that you think was particularly interesting, thoughtful, or insightful, and explain why you think so.

  • It can either be an initial response, or a reply.
  • And make sure to note the class member's name.

Again, I would like you to include quotations from the Blackboard discussion board and/or your chat session.  You should be able to copy text from Netscape or Internet Explorer from the Edit pull down menu.

However, please do not simply copy and paste entire postings, so that your letter ends ups a string of quotations.
  • Instead, reserve quotation for when class members or you say something particularly well, and you want to give me a sense of the "voice" presented in Blackboard.

In other words, the goal of the letter is to tell me what you experienced with and learned from the interaction with each other.

  • Use quotation, summary and paraphrase to back up what you're saying in the letter.
  • And again, make sure to use names, so it is clear whom you are talking about.

Done___

 

Step 6: Email online activity letter.

  • These letters will be e-mailed to me at dholt@lcc.edu, single spaced, though I suggest generating them first in your word processor as a TXT file, then pasting into or attaching onto your e-mail as a safety precaution (plus you can use your spell check, which I strongly encourage you to do).
  • If you want to keep any formatting, such as italics or bold, save your files as rich text format (RTF) and attach to your email.
  • Please use the following format for the Subject heading of your e-mail letters:
  • writ121weekX--topic
  • Example: writ121week9--activity letter
    • (note: everything before the dash is one word--my email software will love you for it!)

These letters are due by Saturday midnight, 3/20/04.

It is true that you have a 24 hour grace period for the letter (see the syllabus about our late policy) but this doesn't extend to the online activities. The discussion board activities and chat cannot be completed past Saturday midnight. Otherwise, you will be counted absent.

If you have any questions, don't hesitate to call me or e-mail me. My phone number and office hours are right above the Table of Contents on the Online Syllabus. I do have voice mail for my phone if I'm not in.

Also, I will be available during my office hours by phone, in person, through email, and on AOL Instant Messenger (my user name: profdan1032)  if you want to talk about the assignments. (If you want to meet at some other time, contact me and we can arrange such.)

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Created 10/20/1997
Revised 15 Mar 2004 05:00 PM -0500