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Writ 121 Online Activities/Writing
Exercises for Week 9
(Tip: the
hover buttons and table below
are to help find your way around these assignments and to other pages and places related
to the course. I suggest you read through the page first
and use the links when you need to review a specific section.)
As your Syllabus states, ten percent of your grade is
based on the online activities and practice writing that we'll call Online Activities/Writing Exercises.
For week 9, we're going to include
Do note that the order I present these may vary from week to week,
depending on what we're doing.
| Attendance requirements As I mention in the attendance
requirements for our class, you must participate in online activities each week no later
than the midnight deadline; otherwise I'll consider you absent.
Also, I will respond to and give credit to your letter/writing
exercises only after I see evidence that you have fully participated in online
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| Grading letters/exercises Again, as your syllabus states,
- Each letter and exercise is worth up to 10
points.
- A hundred words expressing your thoughts about your writing or reading
for this class will earn you 7 points.
- You'll need to write two-hundred words or more
with insight and thoughtfulness and you will need to participate beyond
the minimum requirements in the online activities to earn the 10.
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Step 1: Post a response to
the Blackboard Discussion Board.
Use the week 9 online conversation forum.
- Share a TV or movie story.
- In other words, tell us about a time when something involving TV or
movies was particularly significant, odd, compelling, bizarre, monumental or such in your
life.
- The story can be from your childhood or from last night. But it
should be very narrow, and should potentially interest others.
| When I was four years old, one summer day I stood in my friend's
garage, alone, watching the wringer washer machine*
clean a load of clothes. I had seen a Casper, the Friendly
Ghost episode, in which our hero squeezed through the ringers of such a
contraption. I glanced at my left hand and thought, why not?
Well, I found out why not.
I stuck my fingers in, and realized that didn't feel good, so I tried
to pull them out.
But I couldn't.
Instead the rollers slowly swallowed my fingers, then my palm, then slurped down my forearm.
I began to wail, continuing to pull as hard as I could, while the
machine growled and shook.
Just as my elbow was being sucked in, my friend's father flew out of
the house, hit a lever and popped up the top ringer. He then scooped me up and ran me
home.
My mom rushed me to emergency. No bones were broken.
However, much of the skin from my arm had been ripped off so that it looked like raw
hamburger. And it had to be slowly bathed in a brown antiseptic that burned horribly.
That was the day I found out I wasn't a ghost!
*For those who have little experience with these,
wringer washers don't have a spin cycle to take out the excess water from the
clothes. Instead they have two rollers, kind of like rolling pins, one on top of the
other, that spin slowly. You stick the soggy clothes into the rollers, which
squeeze the water out. Click
here,
if you would like to see a picture of one.
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Step 2: Post another response to Blackboard
Discussion Board.
Choose a passage from Ehrenreich, Kubey and
Csikszentmihalyi, or Pollack and
explain what is significant, interesting or curious about it. (The
catch? You cannot choose a passage that has already been chosen by another
class member.)
Follow closely the following steps: this is practice for using
sources in your essay following MLA style.
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- First: Present the quotation, using MLA
parenthetic citation (see WW 431-34). Here's an example from WW, "Strategies for Revision":
| Toby Fulwiler says, "Revising is reseeing, rereading, rethinking,
and reconstructing your thoughts on paper until they match those in your mind. It's
conceptual work, generally taking place beyond the sentence, at the level of the paragraph
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- Second: Explain how the writer uses the passage you choose. Is
this the main point of the article? Is this a statement to show why those who disagree
with the author are wrong? Is this part of the introduction or body of the discussion? In
other words, show us the context of the passage--the part this quotation plays--so that we
can see how it fits within the overall point of the reading.
| With our example quotation, we could say that Fulwiler is defining the
term revision, to show us how it is different from editing and proofreading. This
quotation we find in his overview of revision--in subsequent chapters, he explains several
techniques that we can use to "resee" our writing, by limiting our focus, adding
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- Third: Explain how you might use this passage in your paper.
- Is this an example of a position that supports what you want to
give us insight about, or
- is it an example of a different viewpoint than
yours that you want to show is too narrow, ignoring your
experience?
- Does the quotation present effective evidence to support
the point it's making?
In other words, show us why you find this quotation significant.
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Step 3: Read and reply to other
class members' Blackboard postings.
- You can agree, disagree, question, qualify what your fellow class member
says.
- You also need to explain why you think so, again
with support from your own experiences and observations, or from another article or web
page.
You will need to respond at least twice to fulfill
attendance requirements. However, you may enjoy responding to more.
- And you likely will find yourself writing a stronger letter
with fuller participation.
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Step 4: Attend a scheduled chat
session (a schedule is available under chat in the table of contents above):
Use the Blackboard Chat.
However, I suggest for a back up
that you all have at your disposal AOL Instant Messenger. If you don't
already have it, you can download it at http://www.aim.com
. (And if for some reason you cannot use either Instant Messenger or
the Blackboard Chat on your home computer? I suggest you go to the LCC
computer lab.)
You do not need to be a member
of AOL to use Instant Messenger and it's free.
- Email me your user name, and
I'll add it to the Scheduled Chat Times page, if you haven't
done so already.
Again, your chat will be
moderated by a class member rather than by me. See the scheduled chat
session page link at the top of this page.
- If your moderator doesn't show
up on time, decide among yourselves who will moderate; whoever does
will earn extra points on his or her activity letter, as long as
it is mentioned.
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- Share one of the articles that I assigned for your Essay 4 prewriting
annotated bibliography.
- You can show each other web pages in the
group browser. Just type the URL in "Enter Address" box.
- Explain briefly what the
article is about, and what you think about it.
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- Share your
response to the video we watched, Does TV Kill?
- What surprised you?
- What looked very familiar to you?
- Which issues brought up in the video would you like
to find more research on?
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- Share ideas you're
considering for essay four--
- try to brainstorm together as many possible
insightful positions you can think of about TV and movies.
- And after brainstorming possible topic positions, as a group decide on three to share with the
rest of us on the Blackboard Discussion board, our week 9 online conversation forum.
- Here's the catch, though. If another group has
already posted, you can't repeat any of their topic positions.
And moderator, please post your group's three topic
positions as soon after the chat as possible.
| Blackboard Chat will make a transcript of your
conversation, which you will be able to access after everyone in the
chat room leaves. It's found in the Archives.
If you move to AIM, moderator, please save the
chat and email me a transcript.
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Step 5: Write Online Activity
letter.
Tell me about your experience on the Blackboard
discussion board and
in chat discussing the assigned articles and ideas for
essay four.
And choose one response on the
discussion board from another class member that you think was particularly
interesting, thoughtful, or insightful, and explain why you think so.
- It can either be an initial
response, or a reply.
- And make sure to note the class
member's name.
Again, I would like you to include quotations from the Blackboard
discussion board and/or your chat session. You should be able to copy text from
Netscape or Internet Explorer from the Edit pull down menu.
However, please do not simply copy and paste entire postings, so that
your letter ends ups a string of quotations.
- Instead, reserve quotation for when class members or you say something
particularly well, and you want to give me a sense of the "voice" presented in
Blackboard.
In other words, the goal of the letter is to
tell me what you experienced with and learned from the interaction with each other.
- Use quotation, summary and paraphrase to back up what you're saying in
the letter.
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- And again, make sure to use names, so it is clear whom you are talking about.
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Step 6: Email online activity
letter.
- These letters will be e-mailed to me at dholt@lcc.edu, single spaced, though I
suggest generating them first in your word processor as a TXT file, then pasting into or
attaching onto your e-mail as a safety precaution (plus you can use your spell check,
which I strongly encourage you to do).
- If you want to keep any formatting, such as italics or bold,
save your files as rich text format (RTF)
and attach to your email.
- Please use the following format for the Subject heading of your e-mail
letters:
- Example: writ121week9--activity letter
- (note: everything before the dash is one word--my
email software will love you for it!)
These letters are due by Saturday
midnight, 3/20/04.
It is true that you have a 24 hour grace period for the letter (see the
syllabus about our late policy)
but this doesn't extend to the online activities. The discussion board activities
and chat cannot be completed past Saturday midnight. Otherwise, you will be counted absent.

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If you have any questions, don't hesitate to call me or e-mail me. My phone number and office hours are
right above the Table of Contents on the Online Syllabus. I do have voice mail for my
phone if I'm not in. Also, I will be available during my office hours
by phone, in person, through email, and on AOL Instant Messenger (my user name:
profdan1032) if you
want to talk about the assignments. (If you want to meet at some other time, contact me
and we can arrange such.)

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