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Writ 121 Online Activities for Week 7
(Tip: the tables below
are to help find your way around these assignments and to other pages and places related
to the course. I suggest you read through the page first
and use the links when you need to review a specific section.)
As your Syllabus states, ten percent of your grade is
based on the online activities and practice writing that we'll call Online Activities/Writing Exercises.
You might also review "Why are we doing online activities?" on the chat session page.
For week 7, we're going to include
Do note that the order I present these may vary from week to week,
depending on what we're doing.
| Attendance requirements As I mention in the attendance
requirements for our class, you must participate in online activities each week no
later than the deadline; otherwise I'll consider you absent.
Also, I will respond to and give credit to your letter/writing
exercises only after I see evidence that you have fully participated in online
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| Grading letters Again, as your syllabus states,
- Each letter and exercise is worth up to 10
points.
- A hundred words expressing your thoughts about your writing or reading
for this class will earn you 7 points.
- You'll need to write two-hundred words or more
with insight and brilliance and you will need to participate beyond
the minimum requirements in the online activities to earn the 10.
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Step 1: Post a response to
the Blackboard Discussion Board:
Use the week 7
online conversation forum.
As your Calendar
notes, you should have read Gavin James Campbell's "I'm just a Louisiana
Girl: The Southern World of Britney Spears" (244-56) and Gary Burns's
"Marilyn Manson and the Apt Pupils of Littleton" (278-83).
- I'm sure you've noted that these are dense
articles, especially Burns.
- If you're having difficulty with them, you might review some of the
techniques about active reading that Fulwiler discusses in chapter
2 of WW and that
Petracca & Sorapure discuss in chapter 1 of CC.
- Also, you might need a dictionary or even an encyclopedia to refer to if
you find terms, concepts, historical events or people that you are unfamiliar with.
- In other words, you will need to give full attention to what
the authors are saying.
- These are not essays you will be able to breeze through during
commercial breaks as you watch Who's Line
Is It Anyway?
or as you sit on the toilet!
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Please post a response to the articles on the
Blackboard .
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- Start off by picking out one point that Campbell or
Burns makes. You can
- quote the point, using quotation marks to show us
you're using his words or
- paraphrase, using your own words to express the
ideas he is stating.
- In either case, note which page number it's on in
parentheses after the quotation or paraphrase.
Here's the catch--you cannot choose
the same passage that another class member has chosen.
No surprise, huh?
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- Explain what you think about the point the
author
makes.
You can explain why you
- agree with the point,
- disagree with it,
- question whether it is so with yourself or people you know,
- extrapolate what he says to a different set of citizens--
- whatever catches your attention or imagination.
- Notice that my request includes explain.
- In other words, you need to point out something
specific from your observations about
- music,
- your life,
- your friends,
- connections to the other author we read,
- other articles or books you've read to support your response.
- Also, please avoid saying that everything the writer says is stupid,
unnecessary, insignificant, incomprehensible or such. Or that the
writer must be brain dead, an idiot, a fool, and so on. In other
words, avoid personal attacks.
- No, I'm not concerned about Campbell or Burns and
whether or not he would feel insulted.
- However, insulting an author in a public, academic
setting can indirectly insult those in your audience who may agree
with the writer.
- Consequently, such responses are conversation
stoppers, not to mention really boring.
- If you think such, that's fine. But for this discussion, keep it to
yourself.
- Instead, pick out a specific point the author makes and show us--with the type of support noted above--that what he says in that
point is unnecessary, insignificant, incomprehensible or such.
- You will more likely be heard
if you treat the authors--and consequently your audience--as
reasonable, thoughtful people. They may be mistaken, but they have
good reasons for thinking as they do.
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Step 2:
Post another response to the Blackboard Discussion Board:
Again, use the week 7
online conversation forum.
As your Calendar
notes, you should have read one other article.
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- First: Summarize
the article in Common
Culture in chapter 4 that we're not all reading or an article from
an outside source on popular music.
- Your summary should be complete in expressing the supporting
points that the author uses in backing up his or her thesis.
Therefore, it should be a substantial paragraph.
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- Second: Evaluate the article,
explaining what you found effective, what you found ineffective, and why.
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- Third: Respond to
the article, explaining your views on the topic based on your experience
and observations.
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The catch? I bet you've
already figured it out--you cannot repeat what another student has already
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Here's a link to Google, if you
want to search the web for an article:

And click here to try several others.
Kartoo is particularly cool, though if you have a slow connection it might
not work very well.
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Step 3: Also in the Blackboard, share a web URL about a
musical artist that you really enjoy.
- And briefly tell us what is interesting about the site.
And do include http:// before the web address. That way,
Blackboard will make a link so we can click on it and view the page if
we want to.
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Step 4: Read other comments about
the music articles and to them.
- You can agree, disagree, question, qualify what your fellow class
members say.
- However, you also need to explain why you think so, again with support from your own experiences and observations, or from
the authors we read this week.
Note: you can reply
- to other class members' initial postings,
- to replies to your initial posting or
- to replies to other class members' initial postings.
- to replies of replies to your initial posting or other
class member's initial postings.
To anything any one of us posts. |
You will need to respond to other
class members at least twice to fulfill attendance requirements.
Though you may enjoy responding more frequently.
And you will likely find yourself
writing a stronger letter with fuller participation.
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6: those who have responses chosen by class members as
interesting and insightful will earn more points for their online
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Step 5: Attend a scheduled chat
session (a schedule is available under chat in the table of contents above):
Use the Blackboard Chat.
However, I suggest for a back up
that you all have at your disposal AOL Instant Messenger. If you don't
already have it, you can download it at http://www.aim.com
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You do not need to be a member
of AOL to use Instant Messenger and it's free.
- Email me your user name, and
I'll add it to the Scheduled Chat Times page, if you haven't
done so already.
Again, your chat will be
moderated by a class member rather than by me. See the scheduled chat
session page in the table of contents above.
- If you moderator doesn't show
up on time, decide among yourselves who will moderate; whoever does
will earn extra points on his or her activity letter, as long as
it is mentioned.
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- Share a song that has been
important to you in some way during your life. It can be a song from ten
years ago or ten days.
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- Share ideas you're
considering for essay three.
- If you have a working thesis, share it with your chat partners. And ask them if it is SWWC or not.
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| Blackboard Chat will make a transcript of your
conversation, which you will be able to access after everyone in the
chat room leaves. It's found in Archives.
If you move to AIM, moderator, please copy the
chat and email me a transcript.
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Step 6: Write Online Activity
letter:
Tell me about your experience with
the online conversation on the Blackboard
discussion board and your chat session discussing our reading,
work, and leisure.
And choose one response on the
discussion board from another
class member that you think was particularly interesting, thoughtful, or
insightful, and explain why you think so.
- It can either be an initial
response, or a reply.
- Make sure to include the class
member's name.
I would also like you to include quotations from the Blackboard discussion
board and/or your chat session. You should be able to copy text from Netscape or
Internet Explorer from the Edit pull down menu.
However, please do not simply copy and paste entire postings, so that
your letter ends up a string of quotations.
- Instead, reserve quotation for when class members or you say something
particularly well, and you want to give me a sense of the "voice" presented in
Blackboard.
In other words, the goal of the letter is to
tell me what you experienced with and learned from the interaction with each other.
- Use quotation, summary and paraphrase to back up what you're saying in
the letter.
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- And make sure to use names, so it is clear whom you are talking about.
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Step 7: Email online activities letter
- These letters will be e-mailed to me at dholt@lcc.edu, single spaced, though I
suggest generating the letter first in your word processor as a TXT file, then pasting
into or attaching onto your e-mail as a safety precaution (plus you can use your spell
check, which I strongly encourage you to do).
- If you want to keep any formatting, such as italics or bold,
save your files as rich text format (RTF) and attach to your email.
- Please use the following format for the Subject heading of your e-mail
writing exercises:
- Example: writ121week7--activity letter
Note that writ121week7 is all one word. Please
do the same so that my email software will know where to put your work.
And--do not send the letter and
prewriting for essay 3 under the same email. Otherwise, I may miss one
or the other.
These letters/writing exercises are due by Saturday midnight,
2/28/04.
- It is true that you have a 24 hour grace period for the letter (see the
syllabus about our late policy)
but this doesn't extend to the online activities. The discussion board activities and chat
cannot be completed past Saturday midnight. Otherwise, you will be counted absent.

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If you have any questions, don't hesitate to call me or
e-mail me. My phone number and office hours are right above the Table of Contents on the
Online Syllabus. I do have voice mail for my phone
if I'm not in. Also, I will be available during my office hours
by phone, in person, through email, and on AOL Instant Messenger (my user name:
profdan1032) if you
want to talk about the assignments. (If you want to meet at some other time, contact me
and we can arrange such.)

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